This reading adventure began in A Corner of Cornwall, with Sandra, who said that although she wasn’t usually a reader of short stories, she’d found Anthony Doerr’s collection, The Shell Collector, ‘exquisite’. That’s the kind of recommendation that makes me seek out the nearest copy. In this case, luckily, at our local library.
I’ve met quite a few people who don’t read short stories.
‘Why not?’ I ask, preparing to pounce, to convert them. I will say, without modesty, that I’m quite good at that.
That claim is, of course, not entirely true. The people who’ve become converts to short forms of fiction because of me, have arrived in my short-story-appreciation-classes, so they must, at some level, have been prepared to be converted. I didn’t go out onto any street and convince anyone.
The truth is that winning people over is a matter of finding the right kind of story, and helping them to find the key, or perhaps I should say, ‘keys’. I do like fiction that can be peeled back in layers. Sometimes they’re simple seeming plots, like the third story in this collection, So Many Chances.
Dorotea San Juan, a fourteen year old in a brown cardigan.The Janitor’s daughter.Walks with her head down, wears cheap sneakers, never lipstick. Picks at salads during lunch. Tacks maps to her bedroom walls. Holds her breath when she gets nervous. Years of being the janitor’s daughter teach her to blend in, look down, be nobody. Who’s that? Nobody.
That’s a nice opening, a quick glance: a neatly summed up characterisation that says to me ‘event on the horizon’.
After all, one of the main rules for a story beginning is that we are at a moment of significant change. A character is about to shift from static to active. All my instincts tell me that Dorotea is about to go from nobody, from blending in, to… well, something. That title, So Many Chances, has to mean something.
It does. Dorotea’s father is about to swop jobs. He’s taking his wife and daughter away from Youngstown, Ohio, to a new opportunity in shipbuilding, in Harpswell, Maine.
That’s exactly what I need, I’m reading on, absorbing the doubts and anxieties of Dorotea and her mother, but all the same, I’m already anticipating a new school. I’m leaping ahead to this opportunity for Dorotea to be noticed. She’ll be able to recreate herself, be somebody.
Doerr’s writing carries me along, he’s so precise that even the most simple moves are elegantly presented.
Dorotea tells nobody and nobody asks. They leave on the last day of school. that afternoon. Like sneaking out of town.
Though there is one that defeats me.
Her mother sits stern and sleepless behind tracking wipers, lips curled above her chin like two rain-drowned earthworms, her small frame tensed as if bound in a hundred iron bands.
I’m still failing to visualise a mouth shaped like two rain-drowned earthworms. But that’s such a minor flaw, when there are so many other beautiful sentences to enjoy. As the journey progresses, and they move closer to the ocean, ‘Dorotea fidgets in her seat. The energy of a cagged fourteen-year-old piling up like marbles on a dinner plate.‘
I could keep quoting.This story is so beautifully written that there are a lot of moments I’d like you to share. If you’ve wondered how realism can be made to resonate, then this story is worth a look.
Be warned, other stories in The Shell Collector are not so firmly grounded. They have their own, different kind of beauty, that I also loved. To sum them up, I repeat Sandra’s assessment of this collection, and say, ‘exquisite’.
There are two more thing to say about my reading of So Many Chances. I’ve resisted the temptation to place before you stepping stones of incidents that will lead you through the events. I don’t want to risk spoiling what is a beautifully paced read, should you also decide to enter Dorotea’s life.
My final comment is about the finish, which I think is beautiful. Once I got there, the closing scene was obvious, it was the only one that made sense. But until that moment, I wasn’t sure how Doerr would, could or should draw the threads together.
Thankfully I don’t need converting to short stories, even now I’m reading a Ray Bradbury collection; but I will definitely make some space for Doerr on my shelf, your quotes from his story are indeed exquisite and the prose seem so assuredly fluid that now I’m very keen to discover Dorotea’s fate! 🙂
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I’ll be really interested in hearing what you think of this collection, Ola.
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My hubby is like that re short stories. They a re very different craftwise from novels and I love them. I think they can have such lovely sentences as you say. If it was hundreds of pages of lovely sentences we would probably lose the gist etc and get overwhelmed but the short story is a perfect medium for a different kind of writing.
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That’s my feeling about them, too: lovely, condensed, experimental… probably easier to cope with in short bursts. And imagine how long it would take to construct a novel in that style!
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I know and I think the kind of writing needed for the long haul that way has to very varied.
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Oh yes, I definitely can’t sustain reading a novel that’s all one speed.
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Same here and the beautify of intricate prose gets too much,. That is why I do love short stories.
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A good short story is like a good poem. It’s all about using the right words in the right place. I love the short stories of Alice Munroe and Margaret Atwood, to name a few. The quotes you included are excellent examples of using the right words. I also know from experience that writing a good short story can often be more difficult than writing a novel. I have some I’ve worked on for years to get just right.
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Alice Munroe and Margaret Atwood are high up on my list of favourites, too. And I know what you mean about setting the right word in just the right way.
I’m intrigued about the stories you’ve been working on. Are you aiming to publish?
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I have entered competitions and some of my stories have even won! I also have short stories in anthologies. I plan to publish a series of short stories about growing up on the Canadian prairies called “You Can Take The Girl From the Country”. If I find a publisher and ever feel they are ready. Like I say, some take years of working on.
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Congratulations on your wins and inclusions in anthologies, and good luck with the publisher. I think it must be much trickier to edit memoir than fiction.
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Memoir can be hard work!
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Very well done. Like a nice piece of cake with a cherry on it. Really enjoyed it. 👌
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Thank you, Jimmy. What a lovely complement.
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As you know, Pat is averse to short stories but I keep trying ~ thanks to your encouragement. I will certainly give Doerr a go ~and persuade Pat, possibly.
By the way if you want to see drowned worms looking like a mouth try this blog:
Do not slight the earthworm – Beaded Quill
Thanks for your enthusiasm, Mike.
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I do hope you enjoy Doerr, Mike. You might sell Pat with his novel, which is promoted on the front of this collection as ‘Bestselling’. I’m hoping to give it a try soon, it’s called All The Light We Cannot See.
I’ve enjoyed your pointer, to Beaded Quill. What an interesting post. I see what you mean, but I’m still not convinced by that Doerr sentence.
And thank you, Mike, for reading about my literary flights of obsession/ enthusiasm 🙂
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I agree with Darlene. For me, it’s all about the writer and the loveliness of the language. Ms Atwood cannot put a foot (or word) wrong.
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I’m in full agreement.
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Cath, I am so pleased that you enjoyed this collection. It’s always a little worrying when someone acquires a book on the strength of my waxing lyrical and especially when it’s someone with experience and expertise in the field such as yourself! I enjoyed So Many Chances too, although it was not my favourite. As for the earthworms, I do take your point. It worked for me because I rarely see what’s being described literally; the image translates to an emotion.
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I’ve loved all of this collection, Sandra, and can only say again, Thank You. I know what you mean about recommendations, reading is such an individual experience. And one of the reasons I picked out So Many Chances was that he managed to make me empathise with the idea of fishing. As a child, I went several times with my brother and loathed it. Though that was what the boy in the story called ‘bait fishing’!
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Yes! A number of the stories featured fishing and I thought the same: I have no interest in fishing and yet here I was enthralled! (Apart from the fishing competion story which was my least favourite by a long way. But we can’t like everything!)
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July Fourth did seem a very different story to the others, perhaps a little longer than I needed, but I liked the ending.
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I enjoy reading short stories collections, but, usually only do so upon recommendation by another reader.
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I do like it when people point me in the direction of a new author.
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Another author for my TBR list. Right now I’m reading a novel (“Another World”) by Pat Barker. I’m pretty sure that I learned of her from one of your essays.
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In that case, I hope you’re enjoying her. I’ve not read Another World.
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Your wonderful post serves as a timely reminder to return to the treasure of short stories again as I slowly return to the world of blogging following a summer of gathering and harvesting poems for my second collection. Although I haven’t read this collection (but now intrigued!) or Atwood’s but loved many of Ali Smith’s and others.
Hmm, it’s so easy to forget the joy of short stories in a world where the novel dominates! Perhaps I’m more of a lover of this genre than I realise. Thanks for reminding me! Rich autumn blessings, Deborah.
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Thank you Deborah.
Sounds like you’ve had a productive summer, I look forward to hearing more, soon. Blessings to you, too.
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I enjoy reading short stories, have read mostly in the Hindi language though; it is like someone narrating an anecdote.
The Shell Collector seems like an interesting one; I loved the title and I loved your post Cath, as always.
Thank you! 🙂
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Thank you, Jagriti. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Am so glad you find ways to encourage people to read short stories, Cath. I love them! Also how nice it is to see we both registered the same recommendation from Sandra. Thanks for your post!
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Thanks, Maria, I do find short stories, mostly, things of joy. And I love having the chance to discuss them.
Did you pick up on that word ‘exquisite’ too? I’d love to hear your take on them.
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The enjoyment is yet to come for me. Will let you know!
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I was interested to read your thoughts on the delights of short stories. My whole life has been an appreciation of short stories. In fact many a bedside table has held one over the years. I find them so inviting as you can often tell yourself, “I haven’t got time”, when it comes to treading. This trend is even more appropriate in our modern, busy lives. The beauty of a short story is that it promotes reading for the reason I’ve just stated. It’s so much easier to read less when you know there are hundreds of pages ahead of you. Seeing you’re only fifty pages from completion of the latest piece tends to drive you forward. My own blog is a mixture of all genres, fact, fiction (long and short), poetry (not so much) and real life observations (quite a lot). I’m actually a frustrated, short story writer. “Frustrated” because my brain has a tendency to keep turning my offerings into full length novels (well, it would if I allowed them to come to fruition). Enough about me, thanks for sharing your talents and I’ll dip in again shortly to see what’s new. I love your style, by the way……very readable.
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Thank you, Graham. I’m so glad to meet a fellow short story devotee, and I do appreciate the compliment.
I’d love to visit your blog, but the link doesn’t seem to be working. I’ve tried two ways, and have no idea of a third. Any chance you could supply me with a link?
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Scratch that request, Graham. I didn’t look properly. Found you: see you there!
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I did not knew there are people who do not like short stories. I am not one of them. 😀
Short stories have there own charm and they finish fast. 😉 Like the way you described Dorotea’s story. Some stories do become obvious but are hard to skip.
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And yes, because of the writers style of weaving them. 🙂
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I agree, Kritika, there are times when it’s all about enjoying the journey, and the destination is just a bonus. 🙂
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Short stories definitely require me to be in a certain kind of mood, to be sure. I’ve noticed my kids don’t mind them at times, too, thanks to magazines like CRICKET which is a literary publication for kiddos.
Say, being the short story fan that you are, would you be interested in beta-reading a short story for me sometime? 🙂
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Would love to beta-read your story, Jean. Do you still have my email address?
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Huzzah! I should have it somewhere, yes. Stay tuned! 🙂 xxxxx
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